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"It's just dislocated, sir. I'll have it fixed in a moment."

Kenichi Hasugawa clenched his teeth as the medic-nin popped his right arm back into place. "The rest?"

"There's some organ damage, and you won't be able to mould chakra for a week, but you should recover," the kunoichi reassured him. "I wish I could say the same for the rest of your team. Genma has at least thirty broken bones, and Teuchi...I'm sorry, sir. What happened to you?"

"Konoha," he gasped. It was so hard to focus. Those kunoichi had torn his team apart like they were genin. The dark-haired girl had to be a Hyuuga, but she'd somehow been running massive speed and strength boost techniques at the same time as a chakra shield and at least two water techniques. Even senior jounin would be hard-pressed to match that level of chakra control. The blonde was just as bad, casually tossing around those massively overpowered wind techniques as if she weren't holding up a chakra shield of her own, and this after dividing her chakra with multiple shadow clones. The one pretending to be Shion had stayed out of the fight, but he still had no idea how she'd collapsed their Shadow Meld jutsu.

The one called Ghost hadn't lied. They really were a whole team of S-rank ninja.

The room was starting to spin, but he had to warn the village. He grabbed the medic-nin's vest and pulled her down to his level. "Spread the word," he gasped. "Team Orange... elite ANBU... do... not... engage..."

Indomitable, Chapter 9

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